"The writer clearly suffers from a fatal conceit."In the comments section two additional comments were suggested,
"Reading this proposal helps me understand the knowledge problem."
"Your paper appears to be the result of human action, but not human design"
"The proposed outline reveals how little people really know about what they imagine they can design."
"Spontaneous order does not apply to writing."Anything better?
"Time spent on this paper was a malinvestment?"